Separate names with a comma.
The Box cant mirror the drums like me, brahzee.
I can't help but wonder how my nigga SlickNick feels about the 10th line of this masterpiece :booker
I keep that Bob Marley on me, in case you want smoke,
I got that blue haze in a suitcase full of coke
and that new base came from the boat,
We be in the street 10 deep with automatics
Timberlands on our feet, Stomping teeth up outta faggots
You dont have to rhyme you with you...that was a quick example cuz I'm at work atm and I got bigger fish to fry...
However, nigga can always be...
Talk slick and a hunting rifle will fucking snipe you
If you think you hot i'll pay a customer to Ice you
Weird structure but I like the way you phrase shit. Try ending the lines where the end rhyme starts, it makes it easier for readers to flow along...
just keep your carb consumption to 500 mg of ecstacy a day....you'll be slim shady in no time.
I Invented the toilet Jetpack, I’m mad strong
You got slapped son, shitted on like scat porn.
yeah, just format it better and you should be good to go.
you have a Zanax addiction and an anthrax prescription,
smoke ecstasy instead, that's what real G's do in prison.
the only struggle you know is the constant feeling of being wack
gunbutt you with the Mack and make your eyeballs roll back like The Undertaker on...
so tell me what ya life like, how does ya squad roll,
niggas told me you repping Grove Street, I could've sworn that was Grand Theft Auto.
Nigga I'll catch you in that trap spot while u smoking crack rock, gat cocked
Blow ya brains out and leave ya memory in your lap like you using a...
you're racing against me in a car that doesn't start,
you got the voice of a klan member and the face of bubba sparxx.
you like to skateboard and wear rainbow colored backpacks with wiretaps,
but here you surrounded by real cats, we sniff out pigs and set up rat...
ain't nobody tryna hear that lo-fi bullshit,
I rather hear you scream when I empty a full clip.
I stays with the pipe like a substance abuse, u fuckin fruit,
I cock and squeeze, you squeeze the cock you prostitute.
Ure a wack faggot, face it fam cuz its true,
Only time ure hard is when a naked man's in the room
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