Separate names with a comma.
Well this is awkward.. Don's in my birth-name like it's supposed to be
But you wouldn't know that, you'll never become close to me
And let me tell...
3 great contrasting verses which all go well together. Good shit guys.
The ending was brutal :shook:
You change your mind based on the weather
Is it a skill to make your rhymes look like they're stapled together?
I had plans to disregard it but...
It's cool man, just hard to reply to :hesky:
I don't need more than 2 lines to prove my - worth
If I don't crucify, you tonight, who sides, with you might - first
Before I've even got time to...
When I saw your post I thought "oh, Slim is back"
But every single bar you wrote diminished that
Dope shit. Very interesting topic too, one that I think has much room for potential.
2nd verse is my favourite and here are some of my favourite...
Can you tell I wrote this high af :hesky:
I will probably hit you up for a fire feature off you pretty soon whilst we patiently wait for your...
Just a quick satirical verse about a trip to Amsterdam:
Straight to the Red Light District - to - get my dick licked
And I only went to...
Always great to read your breakdowns - very insightful. Sometimes I feel like I get carried away with the multis but when it's a written I feel...
I don't know what to say about this lmao
It's funny cos the sense of passion will probably just be from the fact I wrote it all in one sitting, so how I was feeling at that moment...
Flows buttery smooth here :obamawhew:
And I love the wordplay, you got BARSSS SON
oh good and it definitely does, inspiration is the best fuel.
We need more activity in this section it's dead af so I'm on a mission to start...
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
I was hesitant to post a written with this kind of topic in case it came off preachy but it's probably been my...
Appreciate the feedback my man!
There's a few of us about on here I guess lol
Cheers bro, wasn't sure if it'd be a topic anyone would be interested in haha