It's like we take a step forwards then backwards
But this is his form of distraction
Plus, he gets an enormous reaction
When he attacks the NFL so we focus on that
Instead of talking Puerto Rico or gun reform for Nevada
All these horrible tragedies and he's bored and would rather
Cause a Twitter storm with the Packers
Then says he wants to lower our taxes
Then who's gonna pay for his extravagant trips
Back and forth with his fam to his golf resorts and his mansions?
Same shit that he tormented Hillary for and he slandered
Then does it more
From his endorsement of Bannon
Support for the Klansmen
Tiki torches in hand for the soldier that's black
And comes home from Iraq
And is still told to go back to Africa
Fork and a dagger in this racist 94-year-old grandpa
Who keeps ignoring our past historical, deplorable factors
Now if you're a black athlete, you're a spoiled little brat for
Tryna use your platform or your stature
To try to give those a voice who don't have one
He says "you're spittin' in the face of vets who fought for us, you bastards!"
Unless you're a POW who's tortured and battered
'Cause to him you're zeros
'Cause he don't like his war heroes captured
And people are trying to say he spit this off the top
Best Posts in Thread: Eminem rhymes that people might not have noticed
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You're havin' a little trouble fathomin' this is actually happenin'
Like Anderson Silva back when he snapped his shin in half
And then had the shit hangin' by a flap of skin
After he tried to plant the shit back on the mat again
They're also inverse rhymes to the rhyme scheme of that part.
Sandy Hook, Stoneman Douglas
Another lone-wolf gunman
Sometimes I don't know what this
World has come to, it's blowin' up
And this whole country is goin' nuts
And the NRA is in our way
They're responsible for this whole production
They hold the strings to control the puppets
And they threaten to take away donor bucks
So they know the government won't do nothin'
And no one's budgin', gun owners' clutchin'
You're a fuckboy, so next time
It's gonna be heads flyin' like Dez Bryant
With a TEC-9 against Rex Ryan
Now watch me set it like correct time
All you get is sloppy seconds like a Timex, I
Clock rejects into the next life
Talking reckless, but it's just my
Strongest suit, but you can get my Columbian neck tie
Prostitute, just climb in the Humvee and let's ride
Why you hitching at night?
I put an end to your life, sex crime
Kidding aside, insidious vibe
Girl, you know you got the prettiest eyes
But all you're getting is bribed
Any old lie to try to get you inside
Then we gon' end up spending the night
And I'm skinning your hide like an Indian tribe
Pretty much the same rhyme scheme for the whole verse:
He found out, now she feels deserted and used
'Cause he left, so what? He did it first to her too
Now how am I supposed to tell this girl that we're through?
It's hard to find the words, I'm aloof, nervous, and Sue
Don't want this to hurt, but what you deserve is the truth
Don't take it personal, I just can't say this in person to you
So I revert to the studio, like hole-in-the-wall diners
Don't have to be reserved in a booth
I just feel like the person who I'm turning into's
Irreversible, I preyed on you like it's church at the pew
And now that I got you I don't want you
Took advantage in my thirst to pursue
Why do I do this dirt that I do?
Get on my soapbox and preach, my sermon and speech
Detergent and bleach is burnin' the wound
'Cause now with her in the womb
We can't bring her in this world, shoulda knew
To use protection 'fore I bit into your forbidden fruit
How can you dismiss such a prominent facet of rapping.
And yeah, I'm sure you're the only one without an accent. I'm sure you're immune to anything wrong lol
I'm not a real person, I'm a ghost trapped in a beat
I translate when my voice is read through a seismograph and
A noise is spread, picked up and transmitted through Royce's head
Trap him in his room, possess him and hoist his bed
Til the evilness flows through his blood like poisonous lead
Told him each one of his boys is dead
I asked him to come to the dark side
He made a choice and said…
First off we got the the rhymes that go with Don’t which are in purple
Dont / float / ghost / mo
Then the ones that go with speak that are in dark green.
Speak / sheet / beat.
( The Air / A Real ) are also internal rhymes in between that are in light green.
The wrapped in a sheet / trapped in a beat are multis but
(I’m) a Ghost trapped in also goes together with (Seis)mograph and which is why I underlined them.
Then we got when / read / spread / head / bed / led / dead / said.
When is just an internal rhyme, while all of the others are a part of multis. The reason I underlined it is to acknowledge it as so.
Voice is read / Noise is spread / Royces head / hoist his bed / poisonous led / boys is dead / choice and said.
Then we got picked / mitt(ed) / in / him / (evil)ness / His
Picked / him / ness / his are internal, while Mitt and in are a part of this multi
(trans)mitted though / In his room.
Then we also got flows through his blood / Told him each one
and Trap him / Asked him.
When you break down Ems rhymes there gonna be colors, bolds ,underlines and shit all over the place lol
the best I can do is explain what i did and what goes with what.
Inexplicable stomach growl from the pit of it
Like a fucking Terrier hid in it
Despicable, dumb it down, ridiculous
Tongue is foul shoot off at the fucking mouth
Like a missile, a thunder cloud
100 pound pistol pull the trigger this gun will sound
And you'll get a round like Digital Underground
Now I could've either just sat on my ass and pissed and moaned
Or take this situation in which I'm placed in, and get up and get my own
Pissed and moaned / Get my own
Take this / ation / placed in
Ation in which I'm / placed in and get up
It's almost four in the morning and you're in a, nightmare it's horrible
Right there's the coroner, waiting for ya
Nightmare it's horrible / Right there's the coroner (Always loved this multi)
The rhymes in Stan are so sweet the way he hides in that flow
"I'm really flattered you would call your daughter that, and here's an autograph for your brother, I wrote it on the starter cap"
daughter that/autograph/starter cap
Also call your/daughter/auto/for your/on the
Bitch Please 2
Gimme the mic / let me recite til Timothy White
Pickets outside the Interscope offices every night
What if he's right
I'm just a criminal making a living off of the world's misery
What in the world gives me the right
To say what I like, and walk around flipping the bird
Livin' the urban life, like a White kid from the burbs
Dreaming at night of screaming at mom, scheming to leave
Run away from home and / grow to be as evil as me
I just want you all to notice me and people to see
That somewhere deep down there's a decent human being in me
It just can't be found, so the reason you've been seeing this me
Is cause this is me now, the recent dude who's being this mean
So when you see me, dressing up like a nerd on TV
Or heard the CD using the fag word so freely
It's just me being me, here want me to tone it down
Suck my fucking dick, you faggot, you happy now?
His verse on Bitch please 2 is dope as hell.
We got Gimme the mic / let me recite / timothy white / pickets outside / ces every night / if hes right / Gives me the right
Then we got a whole bunch of internal rhymes with Misery / Timothy / Ces Every
Then he has Flipping the bird / Living the urb / Kid from the burbs.
Then he is introducing the Dreaming / Screaming / Scheming rhymes and starts to expand them into multis
with Scheming to leave / Evil as me / People to see / Me being me
and threw in Deep Down / Be Found / Me Now as well as internal rhymes as well.
Then the syllables start to increase!
Decent human being in me / Reason you've been seeing this me / Recent dude who's being this mean.
While having Down / Found / Now. Rhyme internally.
And having Grow to be / Notice me
And finishes his last strand of multis in the verse with
Nerd on TV / Heard the CD / Word so freely
Then puts the Me being me Which is a part of the Scheming to leave rhyme scheme from earlier in the verse.
Safety Seal it
Made me feel a
Navy Seal of
Made me iller
Jay Dee Dilla
Stay here Still in it
Make me steal a
Maybe in for a
Days begin to
Aint this really
Made me into
Aint we sick of
Shadys Still a
Day i went in
Face into the
Plane just entered
Safe descent a
Danger did ya
They mention us
All the multis that go with Lady Killer throughout the verse although i might have missed some!
But the thing I love about this verse is the fact that its got those multis
and then he's got the
Seems as if
tease me with
need a script
eat a dick
c the shit,
be the shit,
Me to flip,
Need a switch,
beat his kid,
he just did,
leave this bitch,
me and shit,
BET cuz if,
degrees in hea ,
cedar chips ,
Mc's just bit,
cling to it,
unleash this shit,
release this pit,
seem as if,
that continues throughout the entire verse and switches around with the Lady Killer rhymes. While still having internals that rhyme with words part of those multis
Like when he says: I was daydreaming one day i would be the shit.
and similar vowel sounds with assonance as well! Like when he rhymes
It cud be Danger, did you make A rangments with the gangsters before you came here.
but then i think Danger did ya, and Rangments with the also go with Lady killer so its just insane lol.
IMO that verse is absolutely SICK.
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